I was going through some old journals I kept during my first few summers up here in the San Juan Islands, back from 2001-2003. I was looking for some notes I had made about whale sightings during that time, but while browsing through the notebooks I came across a poem I wrote in June 2003. I don't remember what it meant to me then, but I think it has some beautiful imagery, and probably means something completely different to me now. I've never been too big on poetry and its cryptic symbolism, but I like this one and thought I'd share it. Let mek now what you think.
Tides
It is easy to find a rhythm in the tides,
To follow the natural pattern of the earth,
But it is easy, also, to get transfixed,
And find yourself lost among the changes.
To ride the rising and falling waves
Is a sure way to be free,
But the tides continue into the night
When it is easier to get lost.
I have found a companion in the starlight
Who made me stop and listen to the waves,
But although he may not always be upon the sands,
I will never look at the moon the same way again.
5 comments:
My favorite lines: "I have found a companion in the starlight, who made me listen to the waves". ...finding your way again among change...
That's a beautiful and well written poem. I thought it was very creative.
Isn't it wonderful how our perspectives change with each moment, and when we look back on something just a few years old, it means something so different to us. I like your poem, and I am sure it means something different to each person who reads it on here.
I was touched by your lovely poem. Beautiful imagery.
Please keep the creative flow coming and be a light for others.
Thank you.
Thanks for all the great comments everyone!
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